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词汇表达灵活多样请继续保持，不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。
In order to chase the development of industry and science, human race activities have affected the nature. We are facing many problems, such as water pollutions, world worming, species distinguish. There are sounds that think it is too late to do anything about all these problems. I don't agree with that. It is true that any of the problem can't be solved easily and immediately. We may take many efforts in many years to deal with them. But, we must do it. If we do nothing and just let it go, the result will be disastrous. Imaging that there will be a few plants on the earth, a large part of the animals will be dead. Our children will have no water to drink, no place to live. How terrible that will be. While other people believe that we shall take effective measures to change this situation and rescue this wounded earth. I am totally agreeable with them. First, we need to change person's idea. It is really helpful if we have a habit to protect the environment. Second，we have advanced technology , with which we can absolutely find a way to overcome those problem. Three, we can only succeed if all the people in world work together. It will take a long time and we need firmly execute. To sum up, we don't standstill because of the negative effect. What we resolve to do is to reduce the pollution and use the resource reasonable.
