2013年5月16日雅思大作文真题:广告的副作用

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Now there is no place where there is no advertising in daily life ,as influnces what we decide to select.Such as the drink called :"Wang Laoji" is shown to us on TV every day.This results that it has became one of our life,because , if we want a drink,we will think of it at first. As far as I know,advertising indeed has presented its negative effects as follow. First,it is no doubt that we have no chance to find what is our favourit one.Advertising is changing deep our life,for this reason that it enjoys popular support. For instance,when we want a car, we believe without a shadow of doubt that advertising tells us how to select it and what is a good car.in brief,we have already lost the option,namely,advertising is instead of us. Second,according to my personal experience,advertising occupies our working time,furthermore,waste the quality time that is owned by us.Such as we are collecting the information which is good for us,meanwhile,advertising occurs within sight from time to time so that we are diverted attention from the target which we are searching.It proves that it disturb us when we are working and studing. To sum up,in dealing with advertising,one cannot but admit that it is controlling us in daily life and it deprives our option and waste our time.