题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
字数:150满分:100分
拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;上下文衔接稍显不流畅。
Nowadays,with the boom of economy and the fast pace of life,the phenomenon of lack of trust is very common.However,Trust has a different meaning for everyone.We should keep on maintaining trust. The first place,Trust makes person's communication easily.For example,we can share our friends' happiness and sorrows.The second place,Trust makes our society full of love.For example,we can help people who may have some trouble.The last one,the existence of trust is so important to everyone.Trust can make somebody's dream come true. After all,we need trust,so,we should keep on maintaining trust.