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Internet is a part of my life. Without it I must be a disable people like a person who have no eye. It means that , Internet are more and more popular in our life. We often shopping on internet chat on internet and reading on internet. Under this conditional, there are some people, they consider that E-books will replace the traditional books. The reason is E-books are very cheaper and convenience .On the one hand at some place the newspaper have replaced by the internet information .On the other hand some book store in the street are closed. If you want to buy some favourite books are never easy now .So they think E-books will replace traditional books.Time will prove it. But I think E-books want to replace traditional books is not easy. If you ask me which one do you like best E-books or traditional books ?I will choice traditional books, because I do not like to read E-books. It will bring more hurt on my eyes,if I reading it for a long time .So I hate reading on internet. When I reading on internet,you can not remark on it and can not focus on reading. Many people like me love reading traditional books.
