2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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my views on online shopping online shopping is a fashion trend today.there are many advantages.our life become faster than ever,we are too busy to shopping in shops or supermarkets.online shopping can catch the pace of our fast life style.online shopping is not only convenient but also environment protection. we don't need to drive out to shop ,it is reduces the air pollution and relieve the stress of the roads. in the other hand,there are some disadvantages too.online shopping sometimes will give away our personal information.online shopping makes us pay more attention to the social honey. online shopping is great.we should make use of it,and solve the problems of it.