Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
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With knowledge and technology quickly development, more and more people began care of education of students. It is important that the investment of education pays in the US Bureau of labor in 2010.From this graph,we find that about 14.9%peoples who not get good education are gained more job opportunity. While the second of number people who get education in high school diploma,following some college graduate student but they not gain degree,associate degree, bachelor's degree,master's degree,profession degree. We not difficult find that people's degree advent , people get job opportunity is growth.In my opinion, we should learn more knowledge and help ourselves challenge in our life.We used technology change ourselves. we should learn more ,so that we can do things that is my love.