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2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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Education pays...
Education pays in higher earnings and lower unemployment rates
Note: Data are for persons age 25 and over. Earnings are for full-time wage and salary workers.

Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.

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With knowledge and technology quickly development, more and more people began care of education of students. It is important that the investment of education pays in the US Bureau of labor in 2010.From this graph,we find that about 14.9% peoples who not get good education are gained more job opportunity. While the second of number people who get education in high school diploma,following some students who are university graduate but they not gain degree,associate degree, bachelor's degree,master's degree,profession degree. We not difficult find that the improve of people degree, the more job opportunity be get in our life.In my opinion, we should learn more knowledge and support ourselves challenge in our life.We know that knowledge change our life and support our life and work more easy. We should learn more ,so that we can do things that is our like ways.

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