2013年5月11日雅思大作文真题:生活质量下降的原因和解决方案

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At present, more and more people, especially the young, are working very hard in the large cities to get a better life. Yet the life quality in large cities is decreasing day by day. Why? Well, there are many reasons for this phenomenon. The main causes of the decline of people's living quality are environmental pollution, health problem and work stress. To begin with, environment pollution can lead a lot of problems in people's daily life. Due to economic development, many people in large cities now can afford to buy pravite cars. Too many cars have not only caused much pollution but also add great pressure for the transportation system in large cities. And many factories focus on obtaining as much as profit as possible without taking some measures to protect the environment, which have lead to serious pollution in cities. Besides, health problem is also an important factor that affect people's life quality. For instance, with the increase of people's living standards, many people are suffering from obesity. And the environment pollution has increased our risk of cancer and many other deseases. Last but not the least, the life quality also deceases in large cities as a result of too much work stress. As we know, too much work stress is not good for people's health. Moreover, in many metropolis in China, such as Beijing, Shanghai, Shenzhen, etc., the competition is so fierce that many people are living with fear of losing their jobs. In addition, the living costs in large cities are much higher than some small cities, as a consequence, those who work in large cities have to work day and night to make ends meet.