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Along with the increasing development of human raise, the environmental condition is getting worse day by day.However, whether the effective measure can make a diffirence to our world is a frequent topic of discussion. From my point of my, our motherland is able to save no matter how borken it is. First of all, the developing industries is the main factor of environmantal problem.This means that we should limite the scale and the number of productions to make sure that the cost of nature resource is under control. For example,due to the enormous needs of raw material, large companies have to explore and harness the nature, which cause the disappearence of forest and the extinction of sea creature. As individuals, we have the right to resist throwaway goods and perfume ,then the market will follow the consumer's wish. Moreover, beacause of the population explosion, the storage resource is facing a dilemma.so un-renewable reasources should mostly be replaced by renewable resourece. As an example, oil is the most indispensable and irreplaceable resource for human activites. In this case, goverments and large companies should devote a large amount of money to study green energy,and citizens should decline the use of cars. However, there are some problem cannot be solved because it is too late, such as the extinction of animals,and depletion of ozone layer. For now, human beings do not have the ability to fix these permenent mistakes, but we still have the chance to preseve the planet from collapse. In sum, even some issues are too late to solve, it does not mean that human race is helpless for their own planet. Indeed, it is possible that we can help togeter to give a better environment to our generations.
