2013年5月11日雅思大作文真题:生活质量下降的原因和解决方案

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Nowadays the quality of life in large cities are undergoing a decline due to various reasons. As we all know, the economic development is always accompanied by environmental problems, such as air pollution, water pollution, natural resource shortage and so forth. The polluted environment is harmful to people's health and that's the fundamental causes of the decrease of life quality in cities. Moreover, as large cities generally have more precious work opportunities and living facilities such as hospitals, schools, colleges, entertainment places and so on which are far more advanced than in less developed cities or towns, more and more young people surge into the large cities to pursue their dreams of leading a better life. As a result, it increased the desity of population in large cities which in turn lead to much social problems, like social isolation, illegal competition, etc.. While we are not able to uproot all these problem at one time, we still can take some measures to ease the situation. For instance, we can relief environmental pollution by means of developing environmentally friendly science and technology as well as greening. Besides, the government should encourage self-employment of young people in order to decentralize the population in large cities. In addition, people themselve should improve their awareness of how to stay healthy and how to relif their stress. In a word, since we have recognised what have caused the decline of our life quality, we can take actions to solve these problems by working together. And our life will be better and better if we stick to sustainable development.