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2013年考研英语作文预测话题:沟通的意义

发布时间:2013-08-23 17:28浏览次数:13034
要求:

题目要求:

围绕沟通的意义写一篇小文章。简明阐述自己的观点。

字数要求:

200字以内

用户的作文(系统评分72.0分
评语:

拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;可适当增加复合句的使用,注意个别句子错误;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳。

用户练习作文:

the role of communication in our life There is a popular saying, that who you are with, what you will be. So it is very important to communicate with others. When a new baby born, he will show his feeling through cry or smile, though we don't understand what's he mean, but we can receive one message that he is healthy. When he is birth to mouth, he glances at everything surrounded him, including who you around him, it shows that he is amazed at the world. When he grows up as a little boy, he can walk、can talk、can laugh a lot, he use his gesture to show you what he think, what he want to know, what he want you know. After he grows up, he will make many friends, and play with them, study with them, and chat with them/ work with them. So, in a human's life, he will make friends with many people, they will exchage their happiness、anger、pain, and that communicating paly an very important role in it.

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