2007年专四作文真题:关于网络交友

文章词汇表达比较灵活，学术词汇的使用要继续加强；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；上下文衔接不流畅，文章结构不严谨。

In our life,most of young people spend their days on the net whenever they are in class or rest time.even more they want to make new friends online,but i do not think this is a wise way to make friend. May they think in this convenient way,and with finger move they can know many friends.but some people catch the shortage of young man to cheat their money,what the most worse is killed by the people they knew from online.recently many news like this come to our ears.the result always be regret by families. So i think young people do not believe people especially knew online.