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英语三级A卷作文模拟附范文:写邮件

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【高频词句】 
1.price list and instruction价格单和说明书 
2.establish business relationship建立贸易关系

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Frank Furedi, professor of sociology at the University of Kent, says we have treated young people as babies and this has led to a growing number of young men and women in their late 20s still living at home. ‘‘Often it's claimed it's for economic reasons, but actually it's not really for that,"says Furedi.” There is a loss of the aspiration for independence and earning a living on your own. When I went to university it would have been a social death to have been seen with your parents, whereas now it's the norm. G) ‘‘So you have this kind of cultural shift which basically means that adolescence extends into your late twenties and that can slow you in all kinds of ways, and I think what psychology does is it passively increase that kind of passivity and powerlessness and immaturity and normalizes that.” Furedi says that this baby culture has intensified a sense of"passive dependence which can lead to difficulties in conducting mature adult relationships. There's evidence of this culture even in our prefer

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