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In recent years,there is a phenominon that an increasing number of students come to neglect the study of Chinese. There are many different kinds of reasons, which change those students' attitude to try their best to study Chinese.Firstly ,they think Chinese couses are boring,there are always some monotonous articals.What's more ,