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Currently, there is a widespread concerned regarding the population. As the graph obviously portray, in the 19th century, there is one billion people all over the world and the population of the global are ten times than that in 19th century. There are many consequences in such condition. To begin with, to satisfy the space demand for booing population, the only available solution for numerous figures is to take occupation of forest and grassland that used to the habitant of wild animals and plants. In addition, the great number of people can not find jobs. I think that drastic measures should be taken to ensure that the efficient of one-child policy be enact.
