2004年1月英语六级作文真题:浪费现象

文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用学术词汇就更好了；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。

With the rapid development of technology and improvement of life standard,more and more people are being waste food and so on.The phenomenon are serious particularly on campus,so we should take some emergency measures to deal with it. Wasting is very harmful.Firstly,although our life is becoming more and more well,many people are still hungry.And everyday there are a lot of people dying ,because they don't have enough food.Secondly,the resource in our planet is limited, so if we waste them,our offspring will suffer disaster.And we also should set a good example for our offspring.Lastly,our student also don't earn a life,what we waste is our parents'hard-working money.So we should instantly stop wasting. As the situation becoming more serious,we should take emergency measures to tackle it.First of all,we should start from me to reduce waste.Next,the government should make an education campaign and complete relate laws and regulations to reduce waste. Only in these ways can we live in a better and comfortable society.