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A person one day start to open shopping net,therefore,net shopping is a new fashion on everyone heart. 20 years ago,we just go to markets where purchase commodity that we need.And beside it is convenient none too.However,we can buy anything in shopping net that likely with a supermarket in which has all goods in world,so just than we do the finger and buy it at once. What a colorful and fashion!We can foreknow everything,yet at home.For it endown us with a lot of benefits,it also bring about some problems which cannot be ignored. First,the softy cannot ignore,our username and password will be easy stolen when we do other things.It is dangers for us,if the thief do things that we cannot image and we will struck with a vengeance. From my perspective,I do hold that advantage of shopping net outweights its disadvantage.And also,we can do something to minimize its negative impact.On the one hand,don't allow any "websites remain your username and password",on the other hand,you can use a function which if you pay one goods,messages will be send to you. Last but not least,i wish you have a good shopping on net.
