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Having a long times ago,we just go to the market in which purchase somethings that we need.And beside it is convenient,none too.However,we can buy anything in internet that is likely with a supermarket in which has goods all over the world,so just than we do the finger and buy it at once. What a colorful style!We can foreknow everything,yet at home.For it en down us with a lot of benefits,it also bring about some problems which cannot be ignored. First,the softy cannot ignore,our username and password will be easy lost when we do other things.It is dangers for us,if the thief do things that we cannot imagine and we will strick with a vengeance. From my perspective,I do hold that advantage of shopping net out weights its disadvantage.And also,we can do something to minimize its negative impact.On the one hand,don't allow any "websites remain your username and password",on the other hand,you can use a function which if you pay one goods,messages will be sent to you. Last but not least,i wish you have a good shopping on net.
