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Everyone hopes to gain success,but success is not easy.We need try a kings of things that we not contact in our day's life. So, If you want to success, you must have strong will. Firstly,what things that make people have strong will?In my opinion,people should do the thing that love by myself and we must have goals. Some people give up work,because they do the things are not interesting and they not purpose. So strong will is very important. If you want to do things and make it prefect,you have to be known that doing each thing need strong will. Secondly, peoples who have strong mind can gain success and finishing work. As our country,we need good people to development our country.However,the good people should have strong will and believe that the things is finished in the end. As younger student,If you don't study hard and not hope get the goals,you not find work that you wand do it.So every personal have strong responsibility to building our country and believe we finish it by our strong will and hard work.student,If you don't study hard and not hope get the goals,you not find work that you wand do it.So every personal have strong responsibility to building our country and believe we finish it by our strong will and hard work.
