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as we all know recently the use of disposible plastic bags is wide.all of us thik that it takes us convenience and we can use it without considering.but did we think about it takes us many questions.we ust use it for one times.then it can make our environment in trouble.you can assume if the plastic bags flying sorrounding your side even if you walk in the road you also see them everywhere and what do you feel about this. so i think we should limiting the use of disposable plastic bags.we should protect our environment from the 'white pollution'.and only with this way can we live a good life.and we share clean air pure water and so on...
