文章在句法方面做的很棒,从句和复杂句的使用不错;作者能较熟练、灵活地使用词汇,建议要多使用学术词汇;文章层次不够分明,缺少组织,需注意文章整体的组织结构。
Books are human's friends and teachers,but should we read all of them or just make options in reading books? Some people think we're supposed to choose what we read.The reason why we choose the book to read is there are many books from good to bad.The bad books absolutely waste your precious time,it's not valuable.And we should chose the book that worth reading. However,other people think we should read books as much se we can.They think the more you read ,the more you get,because both bad and good books can let you figure out the world. In my points of view,we should read millions of books in life ,but what we do when we read the book is to catch what is vauable and ignore the unfavourable aspects.Only in this way can we understand the meaning of reading.