高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

但从句使用不熟练，注意平时练习中多积累；衔接词汇很少，建议加强过渡词和连接词的积累；文中有较多拼写错误，请作者增加词汇量的积累；请注意分段；连词使用偏少。

i lived in a small town which was rounded by some trees. it was a river in the town. There were some fishes in the river. The houses in the town were small and simple, and the roads were tide. People worked hard,but the life was not good. Now great many bulidings have been bulided there. There were great many cars on the street.