2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

过渡词很丰富，衔接词同时使用的恰到好处；能够很好的使用长难句且句法很棒；作者词汇基础扎实，拼写也很棒。

Living in the contemporary society, people are blessed with all kinds of benefits, such as electricity, convenient transportation, computers, Internet and the like, especially computers, which are likely unseparated from our daily life， for it plays a vital role both in the field of work and life, and its statue is moving up day after day. While the highly increasing number of people who maintain the stance that the birth of the computers is beneficial to the whole contemporary society claim that we ought to give it a strong support and make the computers become increasingly popular, the bad social phenomena step into our daily life. It cannot be denied that many net-bars are running illegally in some cities or towns, and even some are offering unhealthy things that involve violence and sex. Hence, for those youngsters, typically those who are not rational enough to control themselves will confront with an unprecedented challenge as well. Rationally speaking, every coin has two sides. We cannot give up eating for fear of choking. On the one hand, computers encourage the development of Information Technology. On the other hand, it promotes globalization a step further. It can't be better if we change a point of view, that is to say, to reduce the drawbacks while we benefit from it. Experts from a great variety of academic fields fully convinced and predict that the computer is indispensable to the development history in the future. And the fact today seems to parallel the prediction. I sincerely forward to computers bring more convenience to us.