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Nowadays,many parents help their children do anything,from cleaning the room to choose their girlfriend.what the parents did they think it was good for them,however,time and society would tell them what's right. The men who were taken account from their parents lack of many abilities,for example,communicate with strangers, analysis the problems,overcome the rubes and so on.They don't know how to live a better life in modern times.It say the parents gave to them a comfortable childhood.In that way,they gave a rough future to their children in the same way.One day in future, parents will leave them alone,and nobody will help you prepare the breakfast,you must do everything by yourselves.That's your independent time. Thus,dear parents should help children to be independent,the most important thing is to give them sufficient freedom time to do anything for own.
