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2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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2012年12月英语四级作文材料来源于美国劳工部网站的一份统计表,本次作文材料截取了其中一部分数据,并对时间做了修改,以下为材料原型,供大家参考。
Education pays...
Education pays in higher earnings and lower unemployment rates
Note: Data are for persons age 25 and over. Earnings are for full-time wage and salary workers.

Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.

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文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;简单句稍微有点多,可适当增加从句使用;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨;请注意分段。

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When you want to give up,think of what makes you stick to the present.Even now I can remember that when I told my boyfriend I want to learn English who the expression of opposition.My cousin surprised of expression,my mother said:”you have to be very tired to do business,why you add new pressure to yourself.”To be honest,I was just a whim at that time and I don’t even know the reason.Perhaps I envy those who are good at English,maybe I had too much time.They are not important,anyway.In the process of self-studay,many times I want to say:screw you English.But I eventually persevered.I don’ t want to regret in the future because i have time and energy to do it but i didn't to.

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