5. 词数:70词左右。文章的题目和开头已给出,不计入总词数。
过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;复杂句采用很棒;文中单词拼写做的不错,另外再增加词汇量积累就更好了;请注意分段。
First,we have to wear uniforms every day,but we think we can only wear them on Mondays,we should be allowed to wear our own clothse.And,we also have no freedom in school when we in Grate Nine,we have so much homework every day.But there are also many good rules in our school,for example,we can exercise every morning,it's good for our health.Of course,we can study in groups in class,it can improve our skills.