2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

行文流畅，但衔接词比较少；句式变化不明显，另外要多多加强从句在文中的比例；请作者增加词汇表达的丰富度，对拼写检查也要重视；请注意分段；连词使用偏少。

Computer and Man The appearing of computer was a reforming war.As the techonogy development , In our lives the computer is more and more important. The world is smaller and smaller. We could doing business with the world businessmen only through a computer .Because the changes of living way caused by the computer became more and more deeper now our lives have nearly not leave the computer.