2010年12月英语四级作文真题:让孩子独立

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There are most of the parents want to do all things for their children.They think that this is concern to their children. As far as my concern,it is so bad for their grow up. For this phenomenon, there are bad affect for their childrens grow up. One the hand, maybe, they are more depend on their parents,and can not do anything. on other hand,they couldn't get along with other folk. They should make their children do something by theirself. for example: wash stock and clothing by theirself.