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2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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Education pays...
Education pays in higher earnings and lower unemployment rates
Note: Data are for persons age 25 and over. Earnings are for full-time wage and salary workers.

Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.

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作者能较好的使用一些学术词汇,同时要避免个别拼写错误;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨;若增加一些从句的使用,文章会取得更好的成绩。

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Now,let's have a look at the picture,which shows the relation between education pays and the earnings. Form this picture ,we can see that those office workers who receive a doctoral degree can get $ 155,1 in return median weekly,and those have a professional degree can earn $ 1,665 even more . However, those whose education level are less than high school edcation can only get 451 median weekly.Moreover, the others have different degree (such as master's degree ,bacholor's degree,associate degree,ect.) have different earnings,ranging from $ 638 to $ 1,053. So... why?why are there such a big difference on their income level? I consider we can easily find the answer in the left bar chart:the unemployment rate.Those who merely get pirmary education have more chance to be laid off,wihle the highly educated persons are faced with apposite situation.The former make up 30 percentage,and the percentage is 3 times as much as that in 2011.Actually, the primary cause is that most companies perfer the high-edcated worker, because workers like that really reduce the corporations' educational cost. Hence,from the above ,we can realize that Study is not the only way to live a greater life ,but the best way.

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