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作者词汇表达较为熟练，学术词汇使用不是很多；可适当增加从句使用，注意极个别句子错误；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。
Now,the problem be becoming a popular topic. How ways make parents to help younger people becoming independent. In present, some people doing even things for their children,so that some body doing things are difficulty when their along. It is dangerous things that children independent development of life and work. To help independent life of child,parents used some measures. Firstly,they hope that their children take part in party with other younger people.And doing some things in that time.For example,cooking,washing and so on. Secondly,parents should talking about things that happen in their work and their face to some difficult in day time .Let's children known their father and mother try to life and work is not easy things. In vacation,give children find out a work that they are doing things replace their playing games,go shopping and sleeping every day. In my opinion,children independent working and life is important.Not only parent things,but also children like doing this things.
