Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
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According to the cover we can see that people with higher education had lower unempoyment rate in 2011 than that with lower education.In that other hand,people with low education had lower median weedly earing in 2011 than that with higher education,so we can kown that it's unfear for the lower education people and i think the govenment should take some measures to deal with situation.I think we should pay more attention to poor family to support then with good education.Only all the people have equal education can we deal with this unfear sitution.