题目:Computer and Man人与电脑
字数:150满分:100分
作者词汇表达较丰富准确,不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意个别句子错误;上下文衔接稍显不流畅。
With the development of the society,more and more people use the computer.Now computer play an role in our life.But playing computer always is benefit or not,different people have different views. Some people think that it is necessary for us to use computer in our life.For example,we can surfing in internet when we meet the questions.Otherwise,by the computer we can play games to relax and also chat with in other.However,others don't think so.They said that it will make us lazy when we come across questions people always use computer than consider by oneself.And sometimes,the answers is wrong in internet,hence we shouldn't use computer always. As far as I am concerned,computer and man just like sugar and coffer.If we without computer,we also can live but we also unconffinet. Therefore,we need computer to help us in everyday life.