英语-日语 - 地盘 - 记录 - 日志 - 下载 - 擂台赛 - 查词 - 翻译 - 排行
  • 登录
  • 注册
  • 建议

      
  • 公告
  • 常见问题
您现在的位置:首页> 大学英语> 英语六级> 真题> 2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:00浏览次数:17423
要求:

题目:Computer and Man人与电脑

字数:150满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分82.0分
评语:

拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用。

用户练习作文:

With the development of the society,more and more people use the computer.Now computer plays a role in our life.But playing computer always is benefit or not,different people have different views. Some people think that it is necessary for us to use computer in our life.For example,we surfing in internet when we meet the questions.Otherwise,by the computer we can play games to relax and also chat with other.However,others don't think so.They said that it will make us lazy to use computer usually, when we come across questions people always use computer than think about the solution by oneself.And sometimes,the answers are wrong in internet,hence we shouldn't use computer always. As far as I am concerned,computer and man just like sugar and coffee.If we without computer,our work and study will become unconvinced. Therefore,we need computer to assist us in everyday life.

会员评论0个评论)
carolinen
金币:8

ta的空间

ta写的其它作文
更多
  • 1
ta本期其它用户练习作文
更多
得分:91.5回忆冰烛

人气:69发布:2013-11-09

得分:88.0fish_encounter

人气:76发布:2013-06-12

得分:88.0Fancy的游乐园

人气:58发布:2013-12-12

得分:88.0小喵喵~

人气:71发布:2013-12-29

得分:87.5jimmy。

人气:49发布:2013-08-02