题目:Computer and Man人与电脑
字数:150满分:100分
拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用。
With the development of the society,more and more people use the computer.Now computer plays a role in our life.But playing computer always is benefit or not,different people have different views. Some people think that it is necessary for us to use computer in our life.For example,we surfing in internet when we meet the questions.Otherwise,by the computer we can play games to relax and also chat with other.However,others don't think so.They said that it will make us lazy to use computer usually, when we come across questions people always use computer than think about the solution by oneself.And sometimes,the answers are wrong in internet,hence we shouldn't use computer always. As far as I am concerned,computer and man just like sugar and coffee.If we without computer,our work and study will become unconvinced. Therefore,we need computer to assist us in everyday life.