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2013全国中考英语试题汇编试题(42)写作:Good Ways to Keep Healthy

发布时间:2013-11-08 16:41浏览次数:360
要求:

健康对我们来说非常重要, 我们有很多方法来保持身体健康。请根据下面表格的提示,以“Good Ways to Keep Healthy”为题,写一篇80个词左右的短文,倡议“健康生活”,从三个方面说明如何保持健康。

短文首句已给出,不记入总词数, 可适当发挥。

1.fooda balanced diet, vegetables, fruit, less meat…
2.exercise do more exercise, take a walk, play ball games…
3.happinesskeep happy, make friends, smile…
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如若增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩;上下文衔接稍显不流畅;文中词汇表达较为丰富准确,但存在单词拼写错误;请注意分段。

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today , i 'm talking about how to keep healthy.firstly,it is nessary of us to have a balanced diet.we 'd better eat more vegetables and fruit instead of eating more meat.secondly,we should do some exeicise everyday,such as taking a walk or playing ball games and so on. lastly but not least,it is impotant for us to happy everyday.we can make more friends who are friendly and learn to smile at everyone.in my oppion,reducing pressure is also a good way to keep our healthy.we can lisen some music to relax ourselves .in a word ,keeping health is very important in our daily life.

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