2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

作者句法基础不错，可适当增加复杂句的使用；作者能较熟练、灵活地使用词汇，建议要多使用学术词汇；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。

Nowadays,computers play an important part in men's life.Men can get something what he want by the computers.Sometimes man can get the batas what he need a long time to count,but computers can help him to find out the batas easily and help him to save much times.Also man is able to search a lot new things what he don't know when he goes to the internet by the computer,so computer becomes a tool to let the man enrich his knowledge.To sum up,I think computer brings a lot advantages to man. However,a coin has two sides.So if a man use the computer in an untrue way,he will make some mistakes in his life.If a student often play aomputer games and doesn't want to study,his studying will get worse and worse.If a work plays too much computer games,it will make him so tired that he has no enough energy to work well. So the computer effects the man so much,but as long as we use the computer in a right way,computer can help us a lot and make our life become more convenient.