小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

文中词汇表达贫乏，但是单词拼写做的不错；可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用；可适当增加从句的使用，注意文中的一些小错误；请注意分段；连词使用偏少。

I have a good friend.her name is lily.She is a beautiful girl and she has a pair of big eye on his face. We share the same table in the class, we often talk about our lessons in the class.When I don' know how to work out some math problem,she always gives me a lot of help.