2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；作者句法基础不错，可适当增加复杂句的使用；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。

Nowadays,computers play a essential part in men's life.Man can get something what he wants by the computers.Sometimes man can get the datas what he need a long time to count,but computers can help him to find out the datas easily and help him to save much time.Also the man is able to search a lot new things what he don't know when he connects to the internet by the computer,so computer becomes a tool to let the man enrich his knowledge.To sum up,I think computer brings a lot of advantages to the man. However,a coin has two sides.So if a man use the computer in an improper way,he will make some mistakes in his life.If a student often play computer games and doesn't want to study,his studying will get worse and worse.If a worker plays too much computer games,it will make him so tired that he has not enough energy to work well. So the computer affects the man's life so much,but as long as we use the computer in a right way,it can help us a lot and make our life become more convenient.