高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

文中衔接词丰富；句式多变，多多练习从句的使用；文中词汇表达稍欠丰富，可是单词拼写做的不错；请注意分段。

my hometown have changed a lot now, In the past ,our town is arrounded by many trees, and a lot of fishes are playing tricks in the clean river .There are many house simple ,but crowed in street. However , the local people's life are happy . currently ,more buildings are built in she street ,and kinds of cars are driving ,but the environment is becoming poor ,little fishes and trees there ,there's most important that is resolving the pollution.