拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;全文结构较为严谨;若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更不错。
For a growing number of people,to communicate with others via Internet.Besides,we write our enjoyment and sadness on our blog to share with friends and families.But there are two sides to every story,does it really only have good impact on us. Some of us stand by communicating through Internet .Firstly,it’s more convenient to know about each other,what help deepen feelings.Secondly,we can speak out the secret -—what can’t share with friends —with strangers. The rest don’t think so,the more communication through Internet ,the more indifferent we will be with who around us.What’s more,the others can’t understand what’s the real thought of our inner world. It is,to my thinking,it’s a necessary way to communicate via Internet,because of its convenience and random.On the contrary,we may be lost ourselves if we use the Internet too much.
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