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Nothing Succees Without a strong Will I very like a poem that is the significance of failure,it said "failure doesn't mean you are inferior,It does mean you are not pefect."I think itis a kind of strong will which lead our life go further.what'more,strong will is a cruial guaranteefor success.No strong will,No success.At least for me,doing something whetever you want or don't want ,if you can't put your heart into it ,you will be a failure.That is because you will give up halfway,may be you meet difficult thing in this procced,may be you feel tired of it and so on .Anyway,you lack of perseverance and are in need of strong will which are great block to your success. So,person with a strong will accomplish great mission.They always be firm and indomitable when they face to trouble or hit from all aspects of life.On earth ,any great job must come from small thing .Wereas,small thing need endurance which reflect a strong will.Anceint China have a proverb ,Days will be down to the great man also, must suffer the mind.Thus,every great man with strong will can accomplish a great work.
