Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;文章层次较为清晰;请注意分段。
True friend always come to you when you need it.They try their best to help you and without thinking what they can get from it.There is a man who is not help you in life but help you in spirit.He comforted you when you upset.He guide you when you confused.Sometimes we both can’t even communicate very well because we come from different countries,different languages,different cultures.But we are still know each other,it must be fate.There is a parlance in China,meet need fate,bosom friend need fate.I have felt that bad luck always has been with me.But now,I believe that God is still fair.