Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
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My Typical Day My typical day is very usual I think.When my clock rang ,it is 6 clock am and I get up.Then I brush my teeth.About 6:30 I`ll do exercise for 30 minutes. After that I eat my breakfast at 7 clock am.At 8:00 am,I will go to the classroom to study about 3 hours.I have lunch at 12:00 am.Then there is break about 90 minutes.Then I have my class from 2:00 pm to 5:20 pm.There is 60 minutes for me to eat dinner.At 7:00 pm my class is begin.And the class is 90 minutes.I will spend half an hour going to domitory .I would surf the Internet from 9:00 am to 10:30 am.Then I will ready to sleep and go to bed at 11:00 pm.