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2008年12月英语六级作文真题:提高心理健康

发布时间:2013-05-18 00:33浏览次数:1900
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题目 How to improve student's mental health
要求
1.学生心理健康的重要性
2.学校应该怎样做
3.学生自己应该怎样做
字数:150满分:100分
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Even some excellent students commit crime or suicide just for something unimportant nowadays. To avoid tragedy happening again, students’ mental health must be improved. However, students’ mental health is usually ignored both by their parents and schools. What’s more, the internet and TV programs are full of violence and depravation nowadays, which are harmful to students’ mental development because students are so young that they are so susceptible to be influenced. To improve students’ mental health, I think family education is important. Parents should spend more time in chatting with their children and treat them as their friends. Secondly, some related subjects should be offered in schools and professional psychological teachers should be employed to help students relieve their depression, anxiety or pressure. Last but not the least, our medium should help to create a positive social value orientation.

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