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The Spring Festival Evening has been held in china over twenty yeas,so many of people think that's our very important festival for us.However,few people think it's opposite ,the meaning of the Spring Festival Evening is nothing,we should be cancel that.As a Chinese,i can't deny what the meaning of The Spring Festival Evening to us,because it's necessary to everyone. In this night, we can get together to wahtching the spring festival evening.