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2005年6月英语六级作文真题:关于盗版

发布时间:2013-05-14 23:28浏览次数:1058
要求:
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Say No to Pirated Products. You should write at Least 150 words following the outline given below: 
1. 目前盗版的现象比较严重 
2. 造成这种现象的原因及危害 
3. 我们应该怎么做
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在平时练习中应增加词汇量的积累;上下文衔接稍显不流畅;文中能较熟练地使用一定的学术词汇,但词汇表达多样性不高,拼写检查还需加强。

用户练习作文:

As the development of society,more and more Pirated Products appearing.I consider the reasons are as follows. First of all,it is the dishonesty.Why i say this is that we know all more and more bussiness men take this as a way to save money.They want to save the publication fee. Not only the bussiness men,but also we customers.We also want to buy something cheap,so that we can can save extra money. And at the same time,most of all have the wrong valve.We lose the awareness to protcet our rights.When we are cheated by these products,we just ignore it.As this renification,these bussiness may find more chances to do this. At last of all,it is the unfullfillment of law and goverment.They may just pay lip services to this and do not take it seriously.As a result,it brings bad influences. And what should we do?Firstly,we should say no to these products.Secondly,the law must be inhanced,improved.Thirdly,we had better keep our rights from being ignored.

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