在平时练习中应增加词汇量的积累;上下文衔接稍显不流畅;文中能较熟练地使用一定的学术词汇,但词汇表达多样性不高,拼写检查还需加强。
As the development of society,more and more Pirated Products appearing.I consider the reasons are as follows. First of all,it is the dishonesty.Why i say this is that we know all more and more bussiness men take this as a way to save money.They want to save the publication fee. Not only the bussiness men,but also we customers.We also want to buy something cheap,so that we can can save extra money. And at the same time,most of all have the wrong valve.We lose the awareness to protcet our rights.When we are cheated by these products,we just ignore it.As this renification,these bussiness may find more chances to do this. At last of all,it is the unfullfillment of law and goverment.They may just pay lip services to this and do not take it seriously.As a result,it brings bad influences. And what should we do?Firstly,we should say no to these products.Secondly,the law must be inhanced,improved.Thirdly,we had better keep our rights from being ignored.