托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第7篇:如何看待电视、电影对孩子的影响

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Have you ever felt violent and vigorous after watching a violent film or TV set? Have you ever spend most time of oen day to watch Ameicain movies or Korea serierals? Have you ever felt weak after watching film or TV sets? If you felt so, you would be certainly in favor of my opinion that watching movie or TV sets have a relatively negative effect on our life rather than positiv effect. To begin with, watching violent movie or TV sets increases the juvenile criminal rates. As we all know, the children are still in their formative years and cannot discriminate the right and wrong. When they watch a movie, the stars, no matter right or wrong their behaviors or words are, will become the child's role model, and they will follw the stars blindly. According to a recent survey in China, about 30% of juvenile crimine are resulted by watching violent movie or TV sets. Obviously, it is the violent movie or TV set that should be responsible fot the ever-growing juvenile criminal rates. Furthermore, watching movie and TV set will waste much time and lead to the students perform bad. We all experienced that when we watched a TV series, the time flies unconsciously. A roommates of mine, who addicted to the Janpanese cartoon and Korea series, often spend his weekday on watching movies. Sometimes. he even watches the TV in the classroom. Unfortunately, in the final exam, he got 59 scores in the Astronomy and Botany and had to revised the two curriculum. It is clear that spending much time on watching cartoon made him failure in the final exam. Finally, watching movie and TV sets longly is unhealthy to people. The radiation that emits from the equipments can make people suffer from the cancer or lead to the aborption of pregant. In addition, the most common and obvious effect is that more and more children have to wear glassed to adjust their short-sight. To sum up, if you are not a good manager of yourself, you might endanger yourself by movies and TV. So why not to be a little wise and put some of your movie or TV time on your other significant things?