2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；文章词汇表达比较丰富，但学术词汇稍显欠缺，此外拼写检查要重视；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

As we all know, computer gradually become the essencial part of our lives. No matter how we deal with someting general, we need computer to solve our problem through the Internet. However,there are many bad influence in computer. The reasons are as follow. First, if we stay computer for a long time, the screen of computer will do harm to our eyes. Some students will make this mistakes and they easily have bad eyesight. If we do not play more attention to it, more and more people will get the bad effect such as have bad eyesight or bad vertebration. Second, computer will make us produce dependency. We will always depend on computer do many things, because by this way we can save many times and get the good solution. Third, there are many interesting things in computer. Many people want to get more confenience ,they will meet each other through computer in stead of meet friends face to face. Or they will spend more time play games、watch movie and so on. Actually, many people still do not know the bad effect of the computer, we should play more attention between people and internet, which can make us live a positive and healthy life.