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2010年12月英语四级作文真题:让孩子独立

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:28浏览次数:5523
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题目 How Should Parents Help Children to Be Independent?
要求
1.目前不少父母为孩子包办一切
2.为了让孩子独立, 父母应该……
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文章词汇使用较为恰当灵活,希望能更熟练地使用学术词汇文章中的过程性词汇比较丰富;简单句稍微有点多,可适当增加从句使用。

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The rapid development of economy our children needn't to worry about anything because,currently,their parents will replace them.Thus,the need to do housework none too which likes to wash clothes and disks,clean their own room,to name but a few.Moreover,children only one thing can do is learning.So why is changed dramatically taking place? There is no denying that kids will have more time to do other things,nonetheless,to some extent ,the kids may have less independence.Above all,parents shouldn't do everything what their kids need to do.For it,parents are able to stimulate kids to do little housework,also put a premium on a small gift.If the kids don't work in ,parents need to talk with them. Obviously,parents,being a good teacher,teaching that everything needs themselves.

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