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The rapid development of economy our children needn't to worry about anything because,currently,their parents will replace them.Thus,the need to do housework none too which likes to wash clothes and disks,clean their own room,to name but a few.Moreover,children only one thing can do is learning.So why is changed dramatically taking place? There is no denying that kids will have more time to do other things,nonetheless,to some extent ,the kids may have less independence.Above all,parents shouldn't do everything what their kids need to do.For it,parents are able to stimulate kids to do little housework,also put a premium on a small gift.If the kids don't work in ,parents need to talk with them. Obviously,parents,being a good teacher,teaching that everything needs themselves.