题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
字数:150满分:100分
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Nowadays,the trust between people and people plays a crucial role in the society system not only for the personal but also for all.How to keep on maintaining trust with others has become an important problem. First of all,in the tratament with others,we'd better to pour more true emotion in it in order to win the trust naturally.Because the gaving always is equel to the feedback in our daily life. Then,it proves that the one who pays much attention to keeping the relationship can obtain the trust of others,for example,sending meseeges to care abourt others,having a visit together.Last but not least, not cheat in tratament even in some little things. In my part,I have recognised the beneficio of others' trust,which helps me resolve much probelms in work and in life.Therefore,I will try my best to maitain the trust with my friends and leagues.