题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
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Nowadays,the trust between people and people plays a crucial role in the society system not only for the personal but also for all.How to keep on maintaining trust with others has become an important problem. First of all,in the treatment with others,we'd better to pour our true emotion in it in order to win the trust naturally.Because the given always is equal to the return in our daily life. Then,it proves that the one who pays much attention to keeping the relationship can win the trust of others,for example,sending messages to care about others,having a visit together.Last but not least, not cheat in treatment even in some little things. In my part,I have recognised the benefice of others' trust,which helps me resolve many probelms in work and in life.Therefore,I will try my best to maintain the trust with my friends and leagues.